On a two lane road

in a driving downpour

I press forward…

Tears flow as the images

replay in my mind.

Like and old record player,

that slowly returns to the beginning

each time it reaches the part

that is too damaged to bypass;

There you are…

writhing like a snake beneath her,

raven locks falling across your chest.

Your firm grasp of her ample round bottom,

as you thrust deeply to release your passion,

extinguishing two fires in a united crescendo,

was more than my little heart could take.


I never saw the curve.

Unlike the well equipped dream car

you bought me,

there were no wiper blades

to shield my eyes

from your acid rain.

© 2012, Dani Heart. All rights reserved.

Dani Heart (46 Posts)


  1. Wow. Perfectly heart-breaking. It always intrigues me how some of the most beautiful masterpieces are created out of hurt and pain.

    Your selection of words and the flow and space between the lines help in the subtle emotional roller-coaster that you created in this piece.

    I love this Dani…and the title is perfect.

  2. Dani Heart (Author)

    Wow.. thank you so much. I so appreciate you taking the time to ingest my words…. especially now that I know what a busy girl you are. ;)

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